Creatively, I'm fighting an uphill battle. The fourth-draft script as it stands, while being complete and finished, is also dry and a little too easy. By that I mean that the events in the book unfold around the characters, as opposed to the characters driving the events. So another rewrite is in order, and unfortunately one of the big plot devices, the titular 'Curse of the Moon's Eye', may have to be cut to serve the new plot structure I'm coming up with. I really hope I can keep it, though. We'll just have to see. I'm reorganizing the plot into five major sections, and I expect the page count to go up again, probably into the 120 range. Ugh.

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